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Words On Paper
Contributed by
hauge9
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Monday, 12th December 2005 @ 05:18:57 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Words on paper do nothing to change things
Sometimes I think itd be nice if they could
Cause I could fill thousands of pages with writing
And create a world where life goes, the way I think it should
Everybody would get what they deserve
Thered be no hunger, injustice, or greed
People would care what they did to eachother
And no one would want so much more than they need
Not everything would be perfect
Because nothing could be as boring as that
Thered be things to strive for, challenges, changes
Just so much more good, and so much less bad
Everyone would wake up happy to be alive
Ready for joy that living another day brings
No big struggles or problems that turn their life into pain
I wish words on paper could actually change things
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hauge9
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2005-12-12 17:18:57]
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Re: Words On Paper
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by Manda2 on
Monday, 12th December 2005 @ 05:39:05 PM AEST
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| Words on paper do change things, reading your poem makes me think how people should be happy to be alive. I am. A brilliant write. I liked this very much. |
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Re: Words On Paper
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by trini on
Monday, 12th December 2005 @ 07:17:01 PM AEST
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I agree with the first comment. Words on a paper change much; it just depends on who they are read to. Democratic leaders are chosen through words on a piece of paper, it's their voices being brought to the people of what they want accomplished-though they may not all be true or just-they still made an affect on people. I really enjoyed reading this, i certainly think this poem should be heard. keep up the good work
-trini |
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Re: Words On Paper
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by Jackee_line on
Tuesday, 28th February 2006 @ 05:13:31 PM AEST
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| this is a great poem, thanks for sharing |
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