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The Misunderstood
Contributed by
chibimiroku
on
Monday, 12th December 2005 @ 11:24:40 PM in AEST
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A boy sits, eyes glued
To the monitor before him
Besides him lies uneaten food
Behind him his parents, their patience thin.
The boy pleads his oft-repeated plea
Just another half-hour, please?
But his parents know not his bid to be free
Their sons addiction is all they see.
The boy returns to his room
And forces himself to sleep
But in his dreams, he raids tombs
Joins a never-ending war, or explores the deeps.
The boy arises in the morning
Finding himself refreshed but not rested
Knowing his teammates for him are mourning,
Knowing his avatars skills lie untested.
The boy plods through school
And cant wait to get home
Where he doesnt always have to play the fool;
Where he hunts with friends, in reality unknown.
The boy hopes for a free weekend
But finds it full of pre-planned events
It seems this week wont break the trend;
Its a Pandoras Box, and he mislikes the contents.
The boy sighs and continues to live on,
Pretends to want to be at the feast
Pretending for what he dreams of most
Is what he receives the least.
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chibimiroku
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2005-12-12 23:24:40]
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Re: The Misunderstood
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 13th December 2005 @ 12:14:55 AM AEST
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u've created a very wise write.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: The Misunderstood
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by the_story_of_the_year on
Tuesday, 13th December 2005 @ 01:02:41 AM AEST
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| holy crap, this is awesome. thanks for posting this. |
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Re: The Misunderstood
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Tuesday, 13th December 2005 @ 01:33:25 AM AEST
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Hey Vincent, it's been awhile my friend. A brialliantly penned piece of poetry. A talented and gifted poet who has the amazing ability to produce a flawless write time and time again.
The boy sighs and continues to live on,
Pretends to want to be at the feast
Pretending – for what he dreams of most
Is what he receives the least.
Keep on dreaming on sweet guy. One of your dreams is bound to come true...
*hugs*
~sue~
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