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Sense
Contributed by
15andcounting
on
Tuesday, 13th December 2005 @ 12:50:34 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Whenever I
hear your name
see your name
say your name
It’s like I’m on fire
underwater
It’s like I’m traveling the speed of light
but nothing’s moved around me
I’m floating like I’m weightless
But my feet are still on Earth
It makes every bit of sense in my mind
but not to the rest of the world
But it doesn’t have to
because it’s my love
and my sense.
Copyright ©
15andcounting
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2005-12-13 12:50:34]
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Re: Sense
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by lostrelic on
Tuesday, 13th December 2005 @ 02:32:53 PM AEST
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lovely poem with alot of sadness
great write
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Re: Sense
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 31st December 2006 @ 02:28:46 PM AEST
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i love the contradictions -
"It’s like I’m on fire
underwater"
truly beautiful. it's like...you know you don't make sense, at least to everybody else...but as long as you understand yourself, it's okay because you know you've retained at least some sanity.
lovely...just...amazingly beautiful. i love it.
- Bethani - |
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