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Walk, Talk, Listen, Give
Contributed by
Slipknot555666
on
Friday, 24th January 2003 @ 04:00:00 PM in AEST
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Walk with me.
Walk and learn about my thoughts.
Walk and learn about how I feel alone.
Talk to me.
Talk to me about love.
Talk to me about hate.
Listen to me.
Listen to me talk about my soul.
Listen to me talk about losing control.
Give me the blade.
Give me the blade so I can kill myself.
Give me the blade so I can leave the world.
Walk to my body.
Talk to me softly.
Listen to my fading heartbeat.
Give me a good reason to live.
There isn't one.
I'm gone.
I've been gone for a long time.
My life was never mine.
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Slipknot555666
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2003-01-24 16:00:00]
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Re: Walk, Talk, Listen, Give
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by bobotheclown on
Friday, 24th January 2003 @ 06:08:03 PM AEST
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This is real and sad. I liked the repetition in this. I liked the structure and how it was broken apart in the last stanza a lot like my poems.
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Re: Walk, Talk, Listen, Give
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by Slipknot555666 on
Saturday, 25th January 2003 @ 03:35:14 AM AEST
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| Whoa, thanks! This is like, one of my favourite poems that I've writen, and I'm glad you liked it also. =). ::hugs:: |
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Re: Walk, Talk, Listen, Give
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by wyrd_faerie on
Sunday, 15th June 2003 @ 09:13:00 AM AEST
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| this is really good...wow... |
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