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Broken Hearted Son
Contributed by
outlaw_mutiny
on
Tuesday, 13th December 2005 @ 05:32:09 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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he kneels before his fathers grave with knees planted firmly on the ground
his head ins burried in his hands and the tears are falling like the pouring rain
in an afternoon storm
the pain tears trough his heart and his joy escapes from the gaping hole that has been left
all he can see when he looks in the mirror is how much of his dad is in him some say you could
even see his dads soul trough his sons eyes
so he clutches himself, nobody else is there to hold him, nobody else would understand
they'd never relate to what he feels inside, the trembeling of his heart the saddening of his soul
the emptyness he's come to call his friend
the way his blood no longer flows like the rivers of change the way that his heart wich was once loving
to one and all the same is no longer able no longer willing to reach out and touch even friends and family
the way his soul is no longer able to move on and is unable to fight another day
so as he places the flowers upon his fathers grave like an anvil droping from the sky a tear makes its way from his
face to the ground the roses depart from his dying fingertips and these words are herd from his lips
"i miss you so much my dearly departed"
then he joins his father on the other side no longer broken hearted
RIP Robert Michael Spivey 1950-2000
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outlaw_mutiny
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2005-12-13 17:32:09]
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Re: Broken Hearted Son
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by Butterflygirl40 on
Tuesday, 13th December 2005 @ 09:29:39 PM AEST
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This is a very sad poem!! But very good..
Thanks for sharing it... Keep writing and i will keep reading your poems^_^ |
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Re: Broken Hearted Son
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 14th December 2005 @ 07:37:38 AM AEST
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Very touching.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: Broken Hearted Son
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by kisser89 on
Tuesday, 20th December 2005 @ 09:13:05 PM AEST
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| nearly made me cry, but loved it |
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