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Final sunset
Contributed by
outlaw_mutiny
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Tuesday, 13th December 2005 @ 05:51:35 PM in AEST
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The evening sun is sinking fast
Taking with it my lonesome past
The day is ending but i dont stand alone
For the angels have come to carry me home
The sorrow is gone, my father is near
I'm no longer a friend of shame nor fear
Life is a poem that doesn't always rhyme
I say as the sun sets for the very last time
I'll soon be riding the waves and the crashing tide
Knowing that things are better on the other side
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Re: Final sunset
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by Butterflygirl40 on
Tuesday, 13th December 2005 @ 09:01:17 PM AEST
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| N ice poem i love the sunset part in this poem.. ^_^ |
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Re: Final sunset
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 14th December 2005 @ 06:00:59 AM AEST
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A briliant write but I certainly hope u don't check out any time real soon.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: Final sunset
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by kisser89 on
Tuesday, 20th December 2005 @ 09:09:01 PM AEST
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| So good, it seemed to make so much sense, and im really glad we started talking |
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