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So many things to say to you
Contributed by
mindless-wish
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Tuesday, 13th December 2005 @ 10:32:32 PM in AEST
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How do i know what i feel?
How can i tell if its real?
Forever alone
I'm always un-known
Just so many things to say
I've tried to find my way to you
I've tried to see the lights
But every time i run to you
I always start a fight
My open mouth has tried to speak
But my heart has tried to scream
Just so many things to say to you
So many things that i mean
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Re: So many things to say to you
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by Misunderstood_gurl on
Tuesday, 13th December 2005 @ 10:55:27 PM AEST
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I loved this poem! i can so relate to this poem. You just want to say something so bad...so many things...but where do you start. gr8 work! keep it up!
-Jessie ^ ^ |
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Re: So many things to say to you
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by Misunderstood_gurl on
Tuesday, 13th December 2005 @ 10:55:28 PM AEST
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I loved this poem! i can so relate to this poem. You just want to say something so bad...so many things...but where do you start. gr8 work! keep it up!
-Jessie ^ ^ |
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Re: So many things to say to you
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by OzChick on
Tuesday, 13th December 2005 @ 11:19:27 PM AEST
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| I've felt this way before. I see this as a great start to a really good poem. I think this poem deserves expanding to say some of what you want/need to say. We all deserve to be heard. I enjoyed this poem as it is though. Well done, Jenny. |
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Re: So many things to say to you
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by the_story_of_the_year on
Wednesday, 14th December 2005 @ 01:15:06 AM AEST
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| I like this. Simple, but not cliche. Well done. |
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Re: So many things to say to you
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by Sophie_Taylor on
Wednesday, 14th December 2005 @ 01:49:45 AM AEST
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great poem
keep up the great writing
sophie xoxo |
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Re: So many things to say to you
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by LostAmbition on
Wednesday, 14th December 2005 @ 01:21:40 PM AEST
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Iv been here before
such a tough spot
it s like the more u try to fix it
the worst u make it! lol! For me anyway.
Love is so hard but worth it still :p
Cute poem here. Hope for the best for ya.
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