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A puppet in this play
Contributed by
In_a_While
on
Wednesday, 14th December 2005 @ 01:08:30 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Send me all the sands from Hell so i can fill a soul I need the sun to see myself deep within this bowl
I filled my heart of hollows with echoes of my grief "My art is of the sorrows!! ..and that's become belief...."
I know my strings so well i'm a puppet in this play I jump on stage and tell "i'm told what i'm to say..!!!"
Bring the soup for me to sip so i can rot in wood My tears will sometimes tend to drip like rains that never could...
dw
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Re: A puppet in this play
(User Rating: 1 ) by emystar on
Wednesday, 14th December 2005 @ 01:13:35 PM AEST (User
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Very creative.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: A puppet in this play
(User Rating: 1 ) by lifeslittleangel on
Wednesday, 14th December 2005 @ 02:03:36 PM AEST (User
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great writing God would want that in his book.
Very creative.
Stony |
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Re: A puppet in this play
(User Rating: 1 ) by shelby on
Wednesday, 14th December 2005 @ 02:49:09 PM AEST (User
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excellant write, flowed perfectly
Michelle |
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Re: A puppet in this play
(User Rating: 1 ) by blacksabbath026 on
Wednesday, 14th December 2005 @ 03:44:09 PM AEST (User
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a nicely written poem, very deep and thought provoking, good job |
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Re: A puppet in this play
(User Rating: 1 ) by Eternal_Dreamer on
Wednesday, 14th December 2005 @ 04:19:49 PM AEST (User
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Dwayne a thought provoking write excellently penned. Although I can feel the sadness behind ur write. Chin up sweet guy. U have friends here who care for you.
Brilliant as always.
*heartfelt hugs for a very dear friend*
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Re: A puppet in this play
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 14th December 2005 @ 04:44:53 PM AEST (User
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gj, mind breaker ty rl |
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Re: A puppet in this play
(User Rating: 1 ) by jdawg on
Thursday, 15th December 2005 @ 01:50:28 AM AEST (User
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great poem, nicely written.. keep it up.. |
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Re: A puppet in this play
(User Rating: 1 ) by darkangeleyes57 on
Tuesday, 20th December 2005 @ 02:33:13 PM AEST (User
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this is really good. I liked it alot and i hope you get through these struggles that ur dealing with>..
take care
christina |
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