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friends by pain
Contributed by
lostrelic
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Wednesday, 14th December 2005 @ 03:19:10 PM in AEST
Topic:
drugabuse
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black sheep walks but road is ruff
thinking that this world is really tuff
blinder by vision guided insaine
life feeling hollow eyes losing there tame
black crow flies guided by a high
try to live that way never wanting to die
cold slender sleep heaven and sky
this is his view freedom is why
black sheep falls but looking for help
familys wont be there with out a doubt
looking for freedom chained by his high
he looks up to the sky he wants to die
black crow soars sees sheep on the way
seeing the chains he lands right away
a comman bond thats what they share
as illguided misfits a burden they have to care
now they friends guided by pain
walk in the sun and hide in the rain
but friends they are not alone in this life
they live for the now and do whats right
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Re: friends by pain
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 14th December 2005 @ 04:43:17 PM AEST
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| great poem, can you post a 34 stanza on this site.. RL about friendship...********* |
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Re: friends by pain
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 14th December 2005 @ 11:49:26 PM AEST
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a soft and yet firm approach at the same time
like some one standing out side themself
as they observe life from another view
point . . .
Ben |
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Re: friends by pain
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by coolbreeze17 on
Friday, 16th December 2005 @ 01:04:56 AM AEST
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| great write...really enjoyed it ..... |
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Re: friends by pain
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by Alina on
Wednesday, 28th December 2005 @ 02:52:52 PM AEST
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Interesting metaphor! I enjoyed it very much...however, you should check spelling and grammar....it would make the poem better...but anyways, great job!
ALINA |
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