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(Title deleted)
Contributed by
Lancaster
on
Wednesday, 14th December 2005 @ 09:24:15 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Transit strikes
Hurricanes
Snow storm
Pass the Novocain
Stick this needle
Into the depths of my brain
Where is remains hollow
Where the worms ate it away
Wars and peace
Guns and fire
Criminal desire
Boundary provider
Taking sides
Steel divider
Iron curtains
Conceal the fire
As one side burns
And the next
Waits its turn
Terrorist a holes
Formidable
Enemy of the state
No one can relate
To the person
A walking mistake
Choose a side
Fund your pride
Invest in your future
Your childrens lives
Are at stake
We got fat
Leave them a slice of cake
Or scorch in the sun
Earthly oven
And everything is baked
Forsake your principles
And its theirs for the take
The greatest generation
Baby boomers replaced
Cancerous tumors
Sliced right off the face
There is doubt
And despair
Judgment clouts
A person
Otherwise moral and fair
No need to compare
Mines bigger then yours
I got it enlarged
Pay at the pump
Self service
Speed
Over the speed-bump
Painted yellow
Cautionary colors
Roadside signs
Become road-kill clutter
Send the bill to the suicidal cutter
False ideation
Feeds this starvation
Plants its seed
Relieved
Via urination
Out of the body
Into the dirt
Waters the grass
With whom the lovers flirt
Rolling around on a blanket
With out any shirts
Oblivious to the leakage
The potential stench
And probable hurt
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Copyright ©
Lancaster
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2005-12-14 21:24:15]
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Re: (Title deleted)
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by justme03 on
Thursday, 15th December 2005 @ 09:02:54 AM AEST
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Wow
awesome write! i enjoyed it..
lots o love, Kortnie |
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Re: (Title deleted)
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by hauntedscorp on
Friday, 16th December 2005 @ 05:12:37 AM AEST
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*Can just imagine the title* :O
I really like the way you veiled this piece...You were able to smoothly blend bits from current events in the news, (and not-so-current), and sneak in some private stash, disguised rather well, I may add. Very clever! Again, sorry to read of such personal sorrow for you, but it does make for some great poetry...
Scorp : ) |
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