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A look into the city
Contributed by
pecjak
on
Thursday, 15th December 2005 @ 09:58:35 AM in AEST
Topic:
abstract
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Drizzle,
thin mist,
gave a gloomy look
into the city.
There was not much to see.
Trash-can philosophy
dazzling cars,
famous drunkards
in forgotten bars,
shaggy beggars
in rags,
hungry street dogs
chewing scattered refuse
from a round-the-corner
hot-dog sale,
classy French restaurants
filled with sitting brains
thawing slowly
in their oyster sauce delight.
Rain,
washing dirt into the gutter,
where the homeless survive,
where the foulest of smells
dwells;
smell of humanity.
Copyright ©
pecjak
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2005-12-15 09:58:35]
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Re: A look into the city
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by Dri on
Thursday, 15th December 2005 @ 01:07:50 PM AEST
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oh! I like this one!
very good description, you took your time with the scene without going on and on. your phrases are fresh and well expressed. this feels like a series of snapshots.
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Re: A look into the city
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by Marko on
Tuesday, 20th December 2005 @ 11:49:18 AM AEST
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| This poem is fantastic |
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Re: A look into the city
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by Jackee_line on
Monday, 13th February 2006 @ 06:10:47 AM AEST
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| well done |
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