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Mistake
Contributed by
jessie53067
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Thursday, 15th December 2005 @ 01:11:03 PM in AEST
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AngryPoetry
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A mometary lapse in reason
A second without thought
And now you lay broken on the floor
A mistake I almost forgot
I broke it to you nicely
It's really better this way
but you won't let go of my hand
And I refuse to stay
I'm sorry that I led you on
Did we ever even kiss
I don't want to have to avoid you
But you're not something I'll miss
You're overbaring
You won't let go
You're holding on too tight
How many times must I say no
Now I relish whenever you're gone
I don't know what to do
I'd rather be alone forever
Than spend my time with you
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jessie53067
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2005-12-15 13:11:03]
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Re: Mistake
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by Dri on
Thursday, 15th December 2005 @ 02:35:03 PM AEST
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be very very careful of how you treat other people. in my general experience, you screw someone over and good ol' karma comes around and smacks you in the head. i lost the love of my life. if you have to let someone go, do it gently.
this write is very brutally honest. i like it. |
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Re: Mistake
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by jdawg on
Friday, 16th December 2005 @ 07:34:42 AM AEST
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WOW.. i like and dislike the poem.. first with the dislike.. cuz it's so.. well like the other comment.. brutal.. but then again i like it cuz i've felt that way torwards someone before but i didn't tell them how i felt in that type of way.. i did it more gently.. but truly a good write.. best of wishes
~Justin L.~ |
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