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Country Drive
Contributed by
stecks
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Thursday, 15th December 2005 @ 02:59:10 PM in AEST
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A place of imagination,
A place where you meet friends,
A place where you keep friends,
A place where your words bend,
A place where I time spend,
A place to keep in mind,
A place that I like,
A place where I hear Mike,
A place where I get sad,
A place where I been bad,
A place where I get mad,
A place where I found this girl,
A place where I found myself,
A place that needs no description,
A place that speaks for itself,
A place that is great,
A place that is horrible,
A place that means everything to everyone,
A place where we all have our most fun,
This is the place Im from.
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2005-12-15 14:59:10]
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Re: Country Drive
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by outlaw_mutiny on
Thursday, 15th December 2005 @ 03:22:40 PM AEST
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| sounds like i've been to that place. not a bad write but maybe you shuold work on rhyme scheme and the layout of your poem still not a bad write |
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