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roll your eyes and get lost in yourself
Contributed by
outlaw_mutiny
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Thursday, 15th December 2005 @ 08:10:48 PM in AEST
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so she sits alone rolling her eyes
unable to control her smiles and cries
alone she sits once again
unable to escape where she's been
looking back to her past
and all the things that never last
nothing ever seems alright
she can hardly stand to fight
she can hardly stand to stand at all
who will catch her if she were to fall
and if she falls will she recieve a hand
or just be alone where she will land
so she rolls her eyes till they stick in the back of her head
forever rolling until she ends up dead
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Re: roll your eyes and get lost in yourself
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by thisismesodeal on
Thursday, 15th December 2005 @ 09:28:13 PM AEST
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| Great poem. Flows really nicely. |
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Re: roll your eyes and get lost in yourself
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 31st December 2006 @ 02:35:23 PM AEST
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i love the..dark, dark humor in this. starts off about one who rolls thier eyes (which i myself am guilty of) goes on the explain thier troubles...which i can feel the emotion in ..and ends up dead b/c of this nasty habit of...eye rolling? lol, i love it.
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Re: roll your eyes and get lost in yourself
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by unknown_utopia on
Sunday, 31st December 2006 @ 02:41:27 PM AEST
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well done
good write |
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