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Confusion
Contributed by
lifeslittleangel
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Thursday, 15th December 2005 @ 08:19:43 PM in AEST
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I struggle and fall, but I can walk
no means to speak, but I can talk
This tunnel, I've escaped, I'll never see
still running from it, but not to flee
I see only clouds in a sky that is clear
still filled with terror, but feeling no fear
I'm soaked with blood that isn't staining
oh wait, it's water, but it isn't raining
forgetting this tunnel flies in my thoughts
these thoughts I'm not thinking, my brain is in knots
I had been fooled, but not decieved
I followed trusted words, I never believed
to run through the tunnel, but stay in one place
to stare at the night sky, but not into space
soaked, colored red, without showing sign
thoughts of this place forgotten in time
all that wasn't, must be an illusion
completely understood, but filled with confusion
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2005-12-15 20:19:43]
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Re: Confusion
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by lifeslittleangel on
Thursday, 15th December 2005 @ 10:58:10 PM AEST
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I love this poem because it is the best that i have ever read and you really have to know what it means to understand what it is about
love ya your sister
Ashlie
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Re: Confusion
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by Spazzo on
Friday, 16th December 2005 @ 04:03:23 PM AEST
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This is an awesome poem, I can relate a lot to it.
Take care.
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