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Decembers Chill
Contributed by
Gothchyk
on
Thursday, 15th December 2005 @ 11:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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The moon shines down upon my bed
casting a silver lining around our love
Fear, shame and doubt have all but disappeared
in this strengthening silence called light
Ribbons curl and paper covers
things that aren't to be seen
But soon the ribbons will be cut
and the paper will unveil
the splendid things unknown
For Decembers chill brings with it warmth and trust
As well as the sparkling snow
tinted silver in the moonlight
that's reflected in your eyes
as you look down lovingly at me
The fire crackles and birds begin to sing
yet we take no heed to the coming day
For the icy wind and swaying trees
give us a reason to stay wrapped in blankets tight
and little other care hath we....
Copyright ©
Gothchyk
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2005-12-15 23:05:00]
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Re: Decembers Chill
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by emystar on
Thursday, 15th December 2005 @ 11:11:53 PM AEST
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Nice thoughts.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: Decembers Chill
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 16th December 2005 @ 02:27:17 AM AEST
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This is just what it is an honest write with lovely tones of romance and cozy thoughts,
i sure liked it, a most splendid little portrait of romance very dreamy . . .
Ben |
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Re: Decembers Chill
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by Jenni_K on
Friday, 6th January 2006 @ 11:50:14 PM AEST
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I love the imagery I'm getting here...
It's quite a comforting feeling...
Loved it..
Jenni |
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Re: Decembers Chill
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by Man_On_High on
Sunday, 19th February 2006 @ 02:24:42 AM AEST
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Your words are unspeakable...
...great imagery and idealisim-
...last 3 lines-
truly-
billy |
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Re: Decembers Chill
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by eggflipper on
Tuesday, 21st February 2006 @ 04:30:01 PM AEST
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| you painted a beautiful scene |
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Re: Decembers Chill
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by wizard on
Tuesday, 7th March 2006 @ 09:36:51 PM AEST
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i loved this completely. these two lines in particular grabbed me:
"The fire crackles and birds begin to sing
yet we take no heed to the coming day "
great post.
wiz
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Re: Decembers Chill
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 18th May 2006 @ 07:31:52 PM AEST
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| So beautiful! I think I have become inspired to learn to love Decembers :-) |
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