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I Am Not (Without Winks)
Contributed by
xnoybis
on
Friday, 16th December 2005 @ 01:40:23 AM in AEST
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I am not here to learn you
I have tried enough times
To know that the concept
Is all but a crime
I am not here to adore you
I have tried enough times
To know that one more
May well make me blind
I am not here to love you
I have tried enough times
To know of the distance
In which we reside
I am not here to save you
I have tried enough times
To know it is futile
And all in our minds
I am not here to comfort you
I have tried enough times
To realize the cracks
In that paradigm
I am not here to humor you
I have tried enough times
To know just how quickly
I run out of rhymes
Copyright ©
xnoybis
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2005-12-16 01:40:23]
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Re: I Am Not (Without Winks)
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by OzChick on
Friday, 16th December 2005 @ 08:52:04 AM AEST
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No, you are not here for any of the reasons you mention. You are here to express yourself and you have done that rather well in this one. I like the style, it has a good rhythm and is easy to read.
I also like the clever twist in the last stanza.
Nice work, Jenny. |
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