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Confused
Contributed by
Devils-confused-daugther
on
Friday, 16th December 2005 @ 07:44:54 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Confused
Do i love you?
i've made a breakthrough
The answer is...Hate
you'll add to the deathrate
for sure you'll migrate
to another estate
but i'm, without you, lost
but my love comes with a cost
and you've wasted all your callbacks
i'm confused
while being accused
of things i'm not
everyone says they know the truth
but they just taut
cos their words are cottoned with candy
poisoned candy with spikes
they say i should see shrikes
pfft i dont need to see psychs
P.S i hope u all liked it.
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2005-12-16 07:44:54]
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Re: Confused
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by little_genna on
Friday, 16th December 2005 @ 07:51:37 AM AEST
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| short and sweet. It is a gd piece, seems quite agressive but in a very deep way.... i like it !! |
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