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Out of Your Way
Contributed by
DesolantDreamer
on
Friday, 16th December 2005 @ 09:17:20 AM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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Burdened to carry this pain
I walk through the halls
My spirit detatched
And my eyes blank
Gone is my heart
The cause of this tremendous pain
It is carried, silently unnoticably, by you
I, as frail as thin glass, walk right into you
"Move!" you shout, angered by my incilence
Like a mirror being hit by a rock
I shatter
Tears fill my eyes
I turn and run
Vison blurred by the tears
I run out of the building
And in a flash of light
And a smash of flesh to metal
The car skidding to a stop
As I whisper to you
"I'm finally out of your way."
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DesolantDreamer
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2005-12-16 09:17:20]
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Re: Out of Your Way
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by lostrelic on
Friday, 16th December 2005 @ 02:33:44 PM AEST
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cool write i like the words you use
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Re: Out of Your Way
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by Jen54 on
Saturday, 17th December 2005 @ 04:16:49 PM AEST
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wow very emotional write. I felt it. great job.
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Re: Out of Your Way
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Thursday, 22nd December 2005 @ 09:51:40 AM AEST
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I liked how you composed this poem. It was well written and i thought it was very good..
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