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Stay On The Grass
Contributed by
Lancaster
on
Friday, 16th December 2005 @ 01:04:25 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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The reunion of two gentle souls
Once separated by dusk and dawn
Gaining a grasp with the clenched claw
Barricading the touch with a solid brick wall
Delirium yields this combativeness
Effective restrictions on a potent motion
Unalike in structure, in pattern
And dissimilar in assembly of concern
Collisions of fortuitous ideas
Knowledgeable awareness
Attachment grows to habits
Addicts in turmoil, mystified, static
The reunion of two unique sprits
Drifting apart after a vague appearance
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Copyright ©
Lancaster
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2005-12-16 13:04:25]
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Re: Stay On The Grass
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by hauntedscorp on
Friday, 16th December 2005 @ 01:40:53 PM AEST
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This was painful to read...I don't know how else to say it. Gotta love the job of the story teller...They have the power to make the story end any ol' way they like. Sad stuff here...but a good spill.
Scorp.
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Re: Stay On The Grass
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by lostrelic on
Friday, 16th December 2005 @ 02:15:54 PM AEST
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great write makes you think
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