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Forgetting about us...
Contributed by
holderofthestone
on
Friday, 16th December 2005 @ 08:50:14 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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This road weve traveled to many times
The angry words
The awkward silence
The way we cry
Time has come to face it
See it how it is
We cant keep pushing each other away
We are falling apart
If I said Im sorry a thousand times
You wouldnt hear it once
You never notice the good times
You focus only on my failures
And not the love we share
My tears form a river
And Im swept loose by the flow
Im following blindly
Trusting in you
Praying for the best
Hoping the worst has past
I knew you years ago
But oh how youve changed
I remember how you smiled
The way you used to glance at me
Peeking hiding
Not wanting me to see
Yet hoping that I did...
Wishing that I noticed
Well I always did
And I always will
Yet you slip away so easily
Not letting me grab hold
You push me away from you
Out of the safety of your arms
You left me all alone
To fight theses memories
And to forget about us
and this love we had...
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Re: Forgetting about us...
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by shelby on
Friday, 16th December 2005 @ 09:28:27 PM AEST
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most tender touching write. One of the most haunting feelings in the world is holding on to someone letting go. Im so sorry for your pain
hugssss to make you feel better if it will
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Re: Forgetting about us...
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by WaterFountainOfTears on
Saturday, 17th December 2005 @ 01:57:25 AM AEST
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WOW.
that is a POWERFUL write...
You did an AMAZING job describing how it was and how its changed...
I honestly feel for you as I've been through this recently...
Great great job. |
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Re: Forgetting about us...
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 30th December 2005 @ 02:00:14 PM AEST
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i can feel every motion that you put into this. its wonderful. You are not alone at all
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