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Behind the darkness
Contributed by
Suzuka
on
Saturday, 17th December 2005 @ 10:45:51 AM in AEST
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Utter silence.
A fragmented tale.
A world without you.
These eyes will close.
Something so natural.
The memory beyond.
Something so simple...
A world between
A forgotten memory.
Behind the darkness.
Copyright ©
Suzuka
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2005-12-17 10:45:51]
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Re: Behind the darkness
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by tiggytom on
Saturday, 17th December 2005 @ 12:41:07 PM AEST
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Short and sweet
Nice write
Tom :) |
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Re: Behind the darkness
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 17th December 2005 @ 01:35:29 PM AEST
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| Short and true. |
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Re: Behind the darkness
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by poetrygirl1991 on
Sunday, 9th April 2006 @ 09:34:23 PM AEST
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short and very true..i like it!!
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Re: Behind the darkness
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by FRANCO on
Sunday, 9th April 2006 @ 09:36:13 PM AEST
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In a utter silence I could hear those clatters in your heart. Well written with a short beautiful stroke.
FRANCO
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Re: Behind the darkness
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by northernlights on
Monday, 7th June 2010 @ 12:26:27 AM AEST
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| These eyes will close.....finality,A world without you.......heart break, all so visible in the silence, well written |
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