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Blooming Romance
Contributed by
CloakedMystery
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Saturday, 17th December 2005 @ 03:34:09 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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As time passed they grew closer,
each day with no feeling to say.
but now for a while,
I've seen the romance bloom into a new feeling,
surpassed love.
but something much to sweet for lust but too strong for love.
could this be a sign that time has drawn them closer?
walking side by side,
I watched them comfort each other.
The blooming romance is growing more and more each day.
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CloakedMystery
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2005-12-17 15:34:09]
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Re: Blooming Romance
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by Fionndruinne on
Saturday, 17th December 2005 @ 04:21:18 PM AEST
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This is good. Quite good. May your friend continue to write.
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Re: Blooming Romance
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by Jen54 on
Saturday, 17th December 2005 @ 04:29:09 PM AEST
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I like it. Its simple and honest.
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