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Did you see that shooting star?
Contributed by
8kiwi8
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Sunday, 18th December 2005 @ 07:04:03 PM in AEST
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InspirationalPoems
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Did you see that shooting star?
Whatever your name is, whoever you are
Did you see it fly so silently
into silence,
into nothing.
Did you smile like i smiled?
Did you wish like i made a wish?
Did you wonder if i saw that shooting star?
Did you wonder if i made a wish?
Whoever i am,
whatever my name is.
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2005-12-18 19:04:03]
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Re: Did you see that shooting star?
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 18th December 2005 @ 07:21:09 PM AEST
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| Yes I think everyone at times has seen that star and I would hope that their wishes came true. Lovely write... Raquel Leah |
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Re: Did you see that shooting star?
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by Ari on
Sunday, 18th December 2005 @ 08:32:04 PM AEST
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I love this, well written, short but sweet
I like how it is very circular, you wondering if they are wondering what you are wondering
peace, love, happiness
Ari |
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Re: Did you see that shooting star?
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by remote on
Thursday, 22nd December 2005 @ 08:59:56 AM AEST
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Ah, nice and fresh work.
Yes I did.
-J |
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