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No Trust
Contributed by
poetic_influence
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Sunday, 18th December 2005 @ 09:02:05 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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Trust isn't something that is handed
So why is the hell is it so damn demanded
Like you have to trust in order to live
But what if this trust is something that I cannot give
You say "Trust me" like I have a need to
But all of your lies...I just can't see through
Trust, What an unthoughtful feeling
Because trust isnt capable of a world so misleading
Your best friend would laugh as they watch you bleeding
So why trust...just so you can get left in the dust
Just because they said this word is an absolute must
So you know what I say to trust
Let the whole thought of it combust
Because there will never be any of the sort to discuss
Trust is just a way of keping your real feelings on the hush
As you watch all that you love slowely get crushed
Because you were in such a rush to trust and have your emotions flushed
Trust..Ha...I'd rather get hit by a bus
So stop all of this superfluous fuss about trust
Because it will never happen for the two of us
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Re: No Trust
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by glassicallyunsuperficial on
Sunday, 18th December 2005 @ 11:29:05 PM AEST
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I like the flow of the rhyme.but, try slowing down...
great job anyways!
cheers,
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