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Yesterday
Contributed by
Jen54
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Monday, 19th December 2005 @ 07:37:10 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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The words of yesterday
Once so full of life
Now echo in the night
Reminding me of you
And how well never be
But the thoughts of tomorrow
Give me hope
That I can move on
And forget those words of yesterday
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2005-12-19 19:37:10]
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Re: Yesterday
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by In_a_while on
Monday, 19th December 2005 @ 07:42:55 PM AEST
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short and to the point... and riddled with thoughts
of yesterday.
My fave lines were the first half:
The words of yesterday
Once so full of life
Now echo in the night
Reminding me of you
Well thought out... keep up the fine writing |
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Re: Yesterday
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by hauntedscorp on
Tuesday, 20th December 2005 @ 12:56:09 PM AEST
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I like those first three lines...how I've felt that before! This is pretty good for a short write. I would've liked to have seen it expanded, because I like your thoughts here, and it would've added to this. Nicely done though still. Keep up the writes!
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Re: Yesterday
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by Spazzo on
Wednesday, 28th December 2005 @ 04:42:13 PM AEST
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This is a great poem, it's so short and deep, I can relate to this.
Take care.
Scott |
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Re: Yesterday
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by hoist1atca on
Thursday, 26th January 2006 @ 12:31:29 AM AEST
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Well Written-
I see that a lot of heart was put into this-
Joe |
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Re: Yesterday
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 29th January 2006 @ 05:55:08 AM AEST
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| Short and simple. Excellent. This pours out emotion. Nice work! |
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Re: Yesterday
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by Tiffyo4 on
Thursday, 23rd February 2006 @ 11:37:36 PM AEST
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| dude you know i like your work and this one proves why i l;ike it. i like it alot |
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