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Dreams
Contributed by
pecjak
on
Tuesday, 20th December 2005 @ 08:05:36 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Behind the dark corridors
of the Universe
there is a precipice
so deep
that no human mind
will ever conceive.
At the bottom,
in a cavern
as big as a billion
desolate
Earth moons,
sleeps
The Lord.
A vast
uncertain
mass of dreams.
Copyright ©
pecjak
... [
2005-12-20 08:05:36]
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Re: Dreams
(User Rating: 1 )
by Marko on
Tuesday, 20th December 2005 @ 11:47:29 AM AEST
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| This poem was confuseing this could take me 2hours to understand what were you actually going on about the first line was perfect keep up the good im certain it will improve keep up the good work pecjak |
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