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Feline
Contributed by
tcssg
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Tuesday, 20th December 2005 @ 10:36:11 PM in AEST
Topic:
Nostalgic
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Her aroma lingers stalks my solitude of forgotten nocturnal years
I breathe night smell her motion while silent pads prod to soften my determination
given to remember over and again before dawn we lapped warm milk
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2005-12-20 22:36:11] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Feline
(User Rating: 1 ) by Aquaelius on
Tuesday, 20th December 2005 @ 10:57:55 PM AEST (User
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I like the shape... kinda like stalking a prey and getting closer to it. Also... this line:
I breathe night
smell her motion
I like it!!!! Strong.
Good write.
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