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Not My Hands
Contributed by
Aquaelius
on
Tuesday, 20th December 2005 @ 10:54:41 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Your skin is so smooth,
Creamy... ice cream on my tongue.
Gloss on my lips.
A numbing sweetness.
On days side by side.
Voices intermingling, topics and fantasies.
A breeze enters unabided.
Carrying your words.
I can see your fingers fidget,
and something would hold them...
but not my hands.
Close proximity staring into eyes, deep... dark.
Your smile streches, your breathes short and expectant.
A breeze enters unabided,
caressing your face.
I can see the lock of hair wisp down,
and something would push it away...
but not my hands.
On nights laying together.
Windows open, free for the world to see love.
A breeze enters unabided,
caressing your naked body.
I can see you shiver,
and something would warm you...
but not my hands.
Your skin is so soft,
Conditioned... silk against my senses.
Lotion on my body.
And it longs to be touched...
But not by my hands.
Copyright ©
Aquaelius
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2005-12-20 22:54:41]
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Re: Not My Hands
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by holderofthestone on
Tuesday, 20th December 2005 @ 11:38:16 PM AEST
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...sigh. i really dont even know where to begin. this is touching and beautiful, with a added touch of sadness... "but not by my hands..." the way this is stated through-out brings out the hidden longing you feel ( and i know all about it, i have that feeling also) stellar write, as usual. A+++++
ANOTHER wonderful poem!!!!! |
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Re: Not My Hands
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by brokenwings on
Wednesday, 21st December 2005 @ 03:07:57 AM AEST
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| very good write... |
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