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just remember what we had...
Contributed by
holderofthestone
on
Wednesday, 21st December 2005 @ 01:56:49 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Nothing is left
Echoing only in my head
These words of forgiveness
They repeat over and over
Im sorry
So sorry
But only I can hear them
They resound through the night
Screaming through the darkness
Keeping me awake,
Keeping me alive
This hope
The longing
Driving me onward
Towards our end
Losing grip of you
Watching you fade
Obscuring this dream we shared
This want to have and hold
Yet only being pushed away
Remembering your skin
The tingling between us
The way you enlightened me
You showed me the way
Showed me who to be
Pressing through the dark
Into you
Slipping on your ice slick love
Trying to get my footing
The neck of a goddess
Calling to me
Begging for my touch
The way I beg to her
Kissing silken skin
The salty taste of sweetness
My perfect salvation
Saving the best for last
Saving me
I cry out to you
Yet all I hear is me
Begging silently in the dark
Comforted only by my tears
Hear me please
Feel me please
Allow me another chance
The loss of you is immense
It overwhelms my senses
The feeling numbs my skin
The pain flows through my heart
All I hear is my screams and cries
All I see are my tears
What Id give to have you again
To caress your shell
To taste your lips
To feel you around me
You scratch at me
"I long for more"
The screaming echoes forever
I remember it
Yet it seems like an eternity ago
You cried out to me
And called my name
longing to bring you pleasure
make you yell "yes!"
make you tell me "more!!!"
You told me more
Than Id ever heard before
I miss the way we were
And how different things were then
I miss the laughs, the love we shared
I need you back again...
Please don't give up on me
I need you more than ever
If we fight now, like we did back then...
We can get back our forever...
just remember what we had...
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Re: just remember what we had...
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by Butterflygirl40 on
Wednesday, 21st December 2005 @ 02:03:14 AM AEST
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| awwwwwww nice poem i liked it:) |
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Re: just remember what we had...
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by brokenwings on
Wednesday, 21st December 2005 @ 02:55:20 AM AEST
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| very nice poem... |
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Re: just remember what we had...
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by Aquaelius on
Wednesday, 21st December 2005 @ 09:26:15 AM AEST
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I really liked this line... "If we fight now, like we did back then..." Ain't that the truth! Fighting is true love. Very good, always an ispiration you are.
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Re: just remember what we had...
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 30th December 2005 @ 01:59:11 PM AEST
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| very beautiful write and breath taking. I bet she remembers and always will |
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