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Behind this mask
Contributed by
undiscoveredshadow
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Wednesday, 21st December 2005 @ 01:33:45 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Behind this mask
Is something you do not see
Behind this mask
Is the real me
Behind this mask
Is the pain I feel
Behind this mask
Is what is real
Behind this mask
Are the scars you caused
Behind this mask
Is where I hide what I lost
Behind this mask
Is a cry for help
Behind this mask
Is everything I felt
Behind this mask
Is nothing but cries
Behind this mask
I wish I would die
Behind this mask
Is something you will never see
Behind this mask
Is the real me
Copyright ©
undiscoveredshadow
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2005-12-21 13:33:45]
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Re: Behind this mask
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by Misunderstood_gurl on
Wednesday, 21st December 2005 @ 03:28:20 PM AEST
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| one word for this poem...AWESOME! i loved it yet it was sad. It reminded me of myself and i know how you feel. Yea i know, you might think that everyone says that...but i really do. you hide yourself from everyone behind a smile, right? well that's at least what i do. |
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Re: Behind this mask
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by The_Phantom on
Wednesday, 21st December 2005 @ 06:10:00 PM AEST
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A great write write reminds me of a poem I wrote back in 2003 called Behind The Mask, we all wear masks we only pick a few to see what lies beyond. Well done.
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Re: Behind this mask
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by BEBE on
Wednesday, 21st December 2005 @ 10:24:59 PM AEST
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awww. thats really sad. : ( greatly written though
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Re: Behind this mask
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by Mallard8 on
Thursday, 22nd December 2005 @ 02:25:35 AM AEST
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Wow, great job keep it up that was great...
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Re: Behind this mask
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by Mallard8 on
Thursday, 22nd December 2005 @ 02:25:36 AM AEST
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Wow, great job keep it up that was great...
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Re: Behind this mask
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by Butterflygirl40 on
Thursday, 22nd December 2005 @ 02:59:33 AM AEST
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| awsome |
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