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high fashioned god
Contributed by
lostrelic
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Wednesday, 21st December 2005 @ 04:50:08 PM in AEST
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understanding faith like understanding life do we really know
jumping from belief to belief right from the get go
religion losing aspect as a pope in prada shoes
with all the starving people its good he doesnt get the blues
hate and blame all in belief not that words can kill
but a frenzied mob with thoughts of god throng for the thrill
war and greed brought from need to battle over land
now we see a killing spree rivers the blood of man
stars the shine past out of time the beauty it lives on
it will last like dust and glass well long after im gone
but in my end i will defend all the rights i have
speak my voice and write my choice this i can be glad
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Re: high fashioned god
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by TREBOR on
Wednesday, 21st December 2005 @ 05:11:09 PM AEST
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| Good poem and challenging =to 'believers' of all types . Like the strong imagery and am impessed with 'throng for the thrill' Not sure what prada is(don't know the word) but pope in prada shoes also stands out |
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Re: high fashioned god
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by Marko on
Wednesday, 21st December 2005 @ 05:58:43 PM AEST
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| Very good religon is such a strong subject and you have just put free speach is a right. You have a talent make sure you use it now i've put everything into prospectus |
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Re: high fashioned god
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by Fionndruinne on
Wednesday, 21st December 2005 @ 07:12:05 PM AEST
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Well done! I like the tone and the images used.
Andrew |
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Re: high fashioned god
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by Sassybat on
Wednesday, 21st December 2005 @ 09:28:13 PM AEST
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| I don't believe 'God' cares in the least about fashion, old or new. The pope may and preachers and televangelists may wear Prada and Armani and Valencia but I can assure you 'God' has more important issues to deal with, such as this world he gave us and what we are doing to it and the free will we abuse each and every day. This is one strange piece of work. |
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