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My Loved One
Contributed by
packatack
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Thursday, 22nd December 2005 @ 01:19:21 AM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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Oh precious woman how much I miss your company
When its time to go out and fulfill our tummies
I remember driving down the road
Of a highway that I didn''t know
And you laughed and smiled at me
Oh how wonderful you looked
I was so lost but sure lost in love with you
Then we pulled in a parking lot
Where we seen a open spot
So you and I can change spots
As I walked around the front
I saw the wind blow your shining hair
I fell deeper in love with you
Nature has a way of beautifying your body
That when I saw you, I couldn''t speak
But when you gave me a kiss
It broke and all I could say was ''I Love You''
Remember that day, it was the best
For our love felt so strong
Seemed like time had stopped
Just for a moment God showed our love
And now I am thankful
For you love me too
Now I must end this poem
But please don''t be sad
Because I am always with you
by PaCkAtAcK
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packatack
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Re: My Loved One
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 16th January 2006 @ 09:54:26 PM AEST
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| how tender a write.. wow.. its wonderful when we catch those beautiful glimpses isn't it. A miracle .. beautiful poem.. an action poem.. lots of color.. nice movie poem.. huggs Raquel Leah :D |
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