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red letter romance
Contributed by
emokid
on
Thursday, 22nd December 2005 @ 01:28:57 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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I should have known
from the red a
on your chest
it would end a mess
I would be better off on my own
you trapped me with your eyes
its no surprise
this is a red letter romance
I want to know
am i still
in the back
of your head
do you still
think of me
when you lay
next to him
The red comes from
the blood of dead lovers
that you slain
for your enjoyment
watch me wither from your touch
You suck the life out of me
i fall into my grave
under your gray eyes
Red letters in the paper
to announce my slow death
a slow smile crosses your face
I hope you are happy
You'll be the death of me
Slowly drain my blood
I'll die as the sunsets
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emokid
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2005-12-22 01:28:57]
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Re: red letter romance
(User Rating: 1 )
by jessalynn on
Thursday, 22nd December 2005 @ 10:27:17 AM AEST
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| I think this is pretty good good context..could be put together better |
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Re: red letter romance
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by Shmokin on
Wednesday, 4th January 2006 @ 08:55:49 AM AEST
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| u set ur emotions out v clearly but ur flow is stilted, there is often some light in the dark, try lookin for it :-) |
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