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Masked
Contributed by
tiggytom
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Thursday, 22nd December 2005 @ 07:50:06 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Losing my patience so quickly this is new
For so long now Ive kept control
Unable to ignore now I appeal
Why are we not whole, why is it that we suffer
Surely a meaning behind that of the fall
Planted like seeds slowly coming to fruition
Our life it now just plays out tradition
Whose line of travel is it we are walking
And from whom is it that we are running
Brain so underused, for what are we missing
A diluted language leaves a watered down meaning
Perhaps that is the plan, the way to go forth
Without meaning or cause, we scratch with our claws
Peeling off from each other our protective skin
Revealing the truth hidden within
Once stripped bare youll have no reason to stare
For we are all the same deep down inside
Just wearing a mask, as we divide and we hide
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tiggytom
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2005-12-22 07:50:06]
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Re: Masked
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 22nd December 2005 @ 08:21:14 AM AEST
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| Omg! That sounds like summink Id say... I realy identify with it. Awesum work. |
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Re: Masked
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by MagicalWishes on
Thursday, 22nd December 2005 @ 08:39:58 PM AEST
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| You words express so much of the uncertainty that I feel. You have true talent. Thanks |
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Re: Masked
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Friday, 23rd December 2005 @ 07:05:24 AM AEST
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Once stripped bare you’ll have no reason to stare
For we are all the same deep down inside
Just wearing a mask, as we divide and we hide
How true these words are dearest Tom. Your work is always captivating and intriguing. A very talented writer whose amazing poetry draws in his reader from start to finish. Well done Tom.
Merry Xmas and a happy and safe new year. May 2006 be a prosperious year for u.
*hugs*
~sue~ |
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