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BLUNT REALITY
Contributed by
China
on
Thursday, 22nd December 2005 @ 11:32:51 AM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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WITH YOU
I TREMBLE
I LOVE THIS FEELING
SO DON'T LET GO
I LOVE THIS TREMBLING
THAT MAKES ME HIGH
LOOK DEEP IN YOUR BLUE/GREEN EYES THAT SAYS I BELIEVE IN YOU
I GOT LOST
WITH YOU
I PUSH MY SELF FARTHER AND FARTHER
EACH MOMENT I FOLLOW YOUR GAZE TOWARDS
WHAT LIES BENEATH YOUR BLUE/GREEN EYES
IT'S A MYSTERY
I THINK ABOUT WHAT YOU PONDER
YOUR THOUGHTS AND MINE
WITH YOU
I GET LOST
I AM NOT MYSELF WHEN WITH YOU
I LIKE THIS OTHER BEING OF
ME
WITH YOU
I GET LOST
DON'T PONDER
ON HOW I BLEED
MEMORIES OF BLUNT REALITY I HAVE WITH YOU
I GET LOST
Copyright ©
China
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2005-12-22 11:32:51]
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Re: BLUNT REALITY
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by Candice on
Thursday, 22nd December 2005 @ 12:56:01 PM AEST
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Wow
I feel the same
Very recently someone came into my life and my life hasn't been the same since.
Thankyou for putting the feeling into words and into a beautifull poem.
I know what I should do now! x
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Re: BLUNT REALITY
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 22nd December 2005 @ 01:11:23 PM AEST
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This poem is as blunt as it's presentation,
and the tittle hooked me and reeled me in, a
bold style u have here, but u do present one
hell of a fine poem, your continuity is very
strong, and ever present keep it up, very
pleasant 2 the eye in it's form, and even
more pleasant 2 read . . .
Ben |
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