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Ignoring Existence
Contributed by
desolated_denial
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Thursday, 22nd December 2005 @ 01:51:40 PM in AEST
Topic:
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You can change my world from black to gold
But you can't ignore my existence
You can hide your pain and kill your happiness
But you can't ignore my existence
You can add your glitter to my grave
But you can't ignore my existence
You can paint my tongue with twisted things
But you can't ignore my existence
You can hide me under a thousand colors
But you can't ignore my existence
You can't
You can't ignore
You can't
Can't ignore
You can taste a million gods for me
But you won't ignore my existence
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desolated_denial
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2005-12-22 13:51:40]
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Re: Ignoring Existence
(User Rating: 1 )
by Marko on
Thursday, 22nd December 2005 @ 01:56:53 PM AEST
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| This a ok poem |
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Re: Ignoring Existence
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by lostrelic on
Thursday, 22nd December 2005 @ 03:30:22 PM AEST
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interesting write kinda lost me but that isnt hard
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Re: Ignoring Existence
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by poet_of_anger on
Thursday, 22nd December 2005 @ 03:34:14 PM AEST
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| I like how you presented this. in my opinion it is more than "a ok poem" it show creativity, and your use of bold is very well done. I like it. |
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