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To Kill
Contributed by
PuppyChow
on
Thursday, 22nd December 2005 @ 05:35:35 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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kill, kill
the whisper cries
and numbly my mind hears and obeys
snatch up the knife, the sword, the spear
the cutting edge is sharpened
the edge is near
your blood will flow upon the ground
don't worry, your soul is safe and sound
downwards, downwards,
downwards it will go
where agony is darkness
and hopes are low
your blood will congeal
your skin will rot
your flesh will be forever sought
but i will hide you well
in the untelling soil
while below, far below,
your soul will toil
in pain and suffering
forever caught
while way, way above
your body will rot
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PuppyChow
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2005-12-22 17:35:35]
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Re: To Kill
(User Rating: 1 )
by Jen54 on
Thursday, 22nd December 2005 @ 05:38:40 PM AEST
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WOW a very intense write. I have felt like this to but could never find the words to express it. You did a great job of doing that. Keep up the great writing.
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