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Unfinished
Contributed by
magicalwishes
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Thursday, 22nd December 2005 @ 07:39:36 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Desire of the shadowy bliss of unconsciousness
The velvety sensations of regret transpiring
Psyche questioning intentions of the air coincidently smokeless
His soul buried so deep within the eyes, everything hiding.
My soul lies nakedly on the surface of my eyes
Nothing to hide, yet everything to conceal
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Re: Unfinished
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by SocialMisfit on
Monday, 2nd January 2006 @ 03:32:27 AM AEST
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not a bad start i would enjoy seeing it compleeted you should send me a message when u finish it.
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