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Dreams never to become reality
Contributed by
MissUnderstood
on
Saturday, 24th December 2005 @ 01:28:13 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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I dream all of the time,
of a life I wish that could be mine.
I dream about ships and clear purple skies,
I dream of meeting the perfect guy.
I dream of dancing on the clouds at night,
and staring forever at the at the moon so bright.
I dream of loved ones long gone, from the past,
But you see these dreams, they do not last.
For as I open my eyes and get out of bed,
I realize that these dreams are only there in my head.
This is my original work
~Nicole
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MissUnderstood
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2005-12-24 01:28:13]
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Re: Dreams never to become reality
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by Xnoybis on
Saturday, 24th December 2005 @ 02:59:38 AM AEST
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I like this one. It seems indisputable from the right angle. However, in times of a higher disposition, it seems like you are the painter with the dreams in your head as a blueprint. Both are equally true in some strange sense.
Clear purple skies, though? Purple seems like a particularly opaque colour to me. haha, just half teasing..
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