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Forbidden Love
Contributed by
CrimsonTears
on
Saturday, 24th December 2005 @ 03:30:43 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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A love thats simply forbidden But a love I cant deny I need you by my side Without you I may die
No one understands The way you make me feel It happened all so very fast I still cant believe its real
My heart rate climbs to extreme heights Whenever Im by your side I love you more than life itself I just wish we didnt have to hide
I just want to tell the world How much you really mean to me But its a secret I mist keep Its just the way it has to be
No matter how much it kills me To say that youre just my friend It would kill me even more If our relationship had to end
So please forgive my sadness I dont mean to be this way But baby without your love I couldnt live another day
Copyright ©
CrimsonTears
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2005-12-24 15:30:43] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Forbidden Love
(User Rating: 1 ) by Lilbabe on
Saturday, 24th December 2005 @ 04:49:06 PM AEST (User
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I LOVE THIS POEM!!!! i'm kinda in a situation like this!!! |
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Re: Forbidden Love
(User Rating: 1 ) by lady-quiet-dreamer on
Sunday, 25th December 2005 @ 12:42:24 PM AEST (User
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i understand where your comeing from. lovely prose and beautiful poem
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Re: Forbidden Love
(User Rating: 1 ) by Jackee_line on
Thursday, 19th January 2006 @ 11:58:52 AM AEST (User
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beautifully written |
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Re: Forbidden Love
(User Rating: 1 ) by FRANCO on
Wednesday, 27th December 2006 @ 11:36:28 PM AEST (User
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This poem should rather have the title as "the divine love". It has so much of true love and inner-agony that follows, the flow of words are interesting and suites the mood of the poem. Good indeed.
FRANCO
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