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Mystery Soul Judgement
Contributed by
Ari
on
Sunday, 25th December 2005 @ 07:03:41 AM in AEST
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Panic strikes fear
In the heart of whats real
And what becomes the world
Is only what you feel
No one knows for sure
About the streams of the mind
But be sure to leave a trail
Once the mind begins to unwind
Its fine if your there
Already been set free
But once your inside
Its hard for a mind to see
Can a soul decide for the mind
What question to ask
Or is it predetermined
Some mystery task
So let the life
Among us be lost
Except for the few
Who chose the cost
Voices clouding judgement
Which path at the light
Will you decide to come back
Or go with no fight
Copyright ©
Ari
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2005-12-25 07:03:41]
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Re: Mystery Soul Judgement
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by PuppyChow on
Sunday, 25th December 2005 @ 12:41:45 PM AEST
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| your style and choice of words is unique and special. please keep it up...i liked the poem alot!!!!! |
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Re: Mystery Soul Judgement
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by sararose1950 on
Sunday, 25th December 2005 @ 06:24:34 PM AEST
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| I really like your writing- makes us think- very good Peace and Light |
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Re: Mystery Soul Judgement
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by Jackee_line on
Thursday, 19th January 2006 @ 09:47:36 AM AEST
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| well done, a nice read |
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