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Odepus
Contributed by
rhei76
on
Sunday, 25th December 2005 @ 11:40:30 AM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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I still think about you,
All day sometimes
What I would say,
What I should write
Just to tell you,
Your happiness
Is what helps me survive
I remember what was & what I did
I'm not asking for forgiveness
Just the chance to read a line
I was still born, alive, & so dead
I was a puppet,severed limbs, no head
I was just a boy
unled
I took the time to learn
But I bled
I remember what happend
& then died
I just need you to write
For some reason
You've always been
The place I hide
You were
You are
the sanctuary of my (soul)
Somehow
Someone
I took for granted (in the whole)
I turn
I turn
Turned around
& hit me back to go
I learn
A bit and grow
Copyright ©
rhei76
... [
2005-12-25 11:40:30]
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Re: Odepus
(User Rating: 1 )
by True on
Thursday, 27th July 2006 @ 07:46:50 PM AEST
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| Interesting poem. I'm a little unsure why you named it Odepus |
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