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Baby... Please...
Contributed by
shrunkin_fool34142316
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Sunday, 25th December 2005 @ 11:26:11 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Baby come near
and listen to my fears
hold me close
and wipe away all my tears.
i need you to be the one
to hold my hand tight
and guide me through this life
please help me make it one more night.
you are the reason i continue
you give me strength to go on
you make me look past the evils of this world
and let me see that we, together have won.
i can not explain this pain
nor am i willing to try
for right now i just want you here
to hold me as i cry.
there is a lot i keep hidden
that you may never know
but baby its so hard to not let
these feelings show.
i promise myself each and everyday
that i must hide this pain
things are so complicated
it would be so hard to try to explain.
baby, just don't let go..
I'm falling into this trap
baby I'm sick of this
I'm about to snap...
where can i find you?
you seem to have left me alone...
baby please don't tell me
that you too have gone!!
baby please get me
hold onto me and never let go
i need you now more than ever
baby there are some things i want you to know.
i need your love to guide me
ensure me for another day
please baby help me
show me the right way.
baby... i love u... i need u...
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Re: Baby... Please...
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by ThrougHThEEyeSOfPaiN666 on
Monday, 26th December 2005 @ 02:26:34 AM AEST
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WOW...that was...amazing. You are VERY talented! great write, keep it up.
MisUnderStoodTeen
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Re: Baby... Please...
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 26th December 2005 @ 02:42:28 PM AEST
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Very sweet, flowing with need and urgency. Love and someone to fill that void, is something most people look for, a risk we take is losing them. Great write.
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