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Hidden from you (what say you?)
Contributed by
iodinelove
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Monday, 26th December 2005 @ 01:23:36 PM in AEST
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What say you when the buried dream buries deeper in your veins?
What say you, the open wound stretching over flesh and bone, the pain settled between your tongues?
It is a dream, and it is a wound buried deeper by that dream.
What say you when, seeing word, shattered word, proven by my fingers shame, provokes, stirs upon the settled eye, stirs dust and love upon the settled eye; it is true that you do not see me, it is true that I am hidden from you.
Seeing desert mountain sea, seeing heaven star and sea, what say you?
Say you, the heaven's mountain fall upon this empty dream?
Say you, the wounded dream buried deeper by the sea?
It is a dream, and it is hidden from you.
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Re: Hidden from you (what say you?)
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by Fionndruinne on
Monday, 26th December 2005 @ 09:28:48 PM AEST
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I like this much, it sounds very well read aloud. I like the way you choose your words with sound in mind, the resulting alliteration and assonance is pleasing, and actually stylistically much like the most ancient poetry.
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