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good-bye December
Contributed by
dc
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Monday, 26th December 2005 @ 01:47:22 PM in AEST
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Lifepoems
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December is a woman.
A desperate, bitter, hateful soul
It was happiness she promised
Its hopefulness she stole
October and November
With all their colors and the smells
Bring back memories and ambitions
Of the strength within ourselves
But December just gets colder
As she takes your breath away
Takes your money people disappear
All colors turned to gray
And Decembers such liar
Shell say anything to please us
But she just takes and takes and in the end
She pretends to give you Jesus
All thats left is hangin on
In the couple months till thaw
And if I didnt last that long
Its cause December took it all
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Nice try December
But you aint getting me no more
All Ive left is dried pine needles
Of your promises before
Good bye December
Come on Girl I got your game
Dress you up in bows and ribbons
But youll always be the same
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dc
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2005-12-26 13:47:22]
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Re: good-bye December
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by Sassybat on
Monday, 26th December 2005 @ 08:05:28 PM AEST
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This is a very sad poem. Not because it is not what you want it to be, but because it is the month we celebrate the birth of our saviour, Christ. What better month to celebrate than when the North Star is shining so bright. When so many people are of good cheer. We give presents to our children emulating the gifts given to the Christ child by the wise men. What better gift could be given unto us by God above than the Christ child and hope for peace around the world.
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Re: good-bye December
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by Cynic on
Friday, 30th December 2005 @ 07:19:53 PM AEST
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Brilliant. Especially:
"But she just takes and takes and in the end
She pretends to give you Jesus"
I loved it. |
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Re: good-bye December
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by Jenni_K on
Wednesday, 4th January 2006 @ 03:45:49 PM AEST
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I love the analogy used here....
Splendid job...
Welcome to YPDC....
Jenni... |
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Re: good-bye December
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 5th January 2006 @ 03:09:09 PM AEST
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| I have to smile at this writing piece.. I never ever thought to place gender to a month... this is a fantastic write.. December is cold.. silent...waiting for something to happen, preparing, icing nature... sort of like giving it a jump start... December does seem to rob.. but April comes along, and she says, move over woman, here I am lol. RL |
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