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Call It What You Will
Contributed by
Jyssvw22
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Monday, 26th December 2005 @ 06:32:06 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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No more needs to be said
Nothing more can be expected
There is little room for error
Tiny mistakes of inconvenience
The water glass is tilted
The spoils fall to the carpet
The drops run out of surface
And they collectively are wasted
Membership is limited
Criteria never reaches capabilities
The extra inch to complete the portrait
The canvas is too short ,and it too dies
No worries after the sun sets
No crimes happen at night
Everything is safe and in its place
Or so you thought, when you shut out the lights
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Copyright ©
Jyssvw22
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2005-12-26 18:32:06]
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Re: Call It What You Will
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by LostAmbition on
Monday, 26th December 2005 @ 11:15:38 PM AEST
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Dude, this sounds rough
like your in a tough spot
with yer emotions ect.
Hope things get better
or Im reading this wroong
Good poem |
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Re: Call It What You Will
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by hauntedscorp on
Wednesday, 28th December 2005 @ 08:01:46 PM AEST
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Quite personal, it seems. Rather veiled too, in a not-so-obvious way, I suppose. That ending could mean many things, it leaves the reader wondering. Nicely done.
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