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Sometimes
Contributed by
Cynic
on
Monday, 26th December 2005 @ 08:47:03 PM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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Sometimes the sun dims
And we play in the shadows
And fall in the rain
Sometimes the skies close
And we hide in the branches
And float with the clouds
Sometimes the dark comes
And we lose the path
And live with our dreams
And daylight sees no end to us
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2005-12-26 20:47:03]
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Re: Sometimes
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by Silent-No-More on
Friday, 30th December 2005 @ 01:53:37 PM AEST
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My! Well... welcome to YPDC, Cynic! After having read your first few posts, I am quite delighted that you have joined us here. Your voice is really quite wonderful and your work very well crafted. I will most definitely keep an eye on your page!
This piece resonates... I find echoes of my own thoughts here and couldn't help but read it again and again... eventually speaking it aloud. It feels, as best I can describe it, terribly right as it falls off the tongue. I completely adore the tone of this piece.
A new fan,
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