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Esoteric
Contributed by
lancaster
on
Tuesday, 27th December 2005 @ 02:17:30 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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I have dreamed of a love
For longer than love has existed
I have seen you
Before my eyes could process
The image of beauty
Tampers with sensory
And the dream is real to me
And thats all that matters
I have dreamed of a peace
Long before there was ever war
Bitten into the apple
Roam free with the cattle
On a road to the white temple
That sits above the Mount of Olives
Perched on the shelf of near heaven
Ascending slowly into the darkness
They come with their swords swinging
On horse, horses never seem to mind the killing
I have worn the clothing of Adam
Had he been naked without shame
The winter is cold
Colder then ever before
With winds that speed ferociously
Hang to the poles cemented into the rubble
Swept away by natural decay and constant turmoil
Avenge the sky with shouts of tomorrows
I have dreamed of the fiery pits
Long before heaven and hell split
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Re: Esoteric
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by BEBE on
Tuesday, 27th December 2005 @ 02:54:07 PM AEST
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Very nice, and artsistic piece! Yet i don't uderstand the meaning (if there is one) that you are trying to portray to the reader. But over all i loved it! keep up the good work
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Re: Esoteric
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by Sophie_Taylor on
Tuesday, 27th December 2005 @ 06:33:13 PM AEST
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keep up the great writing
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Re: Esoteric
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by NoSaint on
Tuesday, 27th December 2005 @ 06:36:41 PM AEST
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well done
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Re: Esoteric
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by hauntedscorp on
Wednesday, 28th December 2005 @ 07:31:55 PM AEST
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Nicely done Lancaster. Some good visuals.
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