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Something phenomenal has occurred what could it be?
Contributed by
kamal
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Tuesday, 27th December 2005 @ 08:11:47 PM in AEST
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InspirationalPoems
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Our times of laughter together we shared, we could no longer see!
Its always start out right in the beginning, candle lights,
then dinner under a moonlight.
Our mind & body caresses every moment
While fantasies are being fulfilled
Not a dream deferred
Can it ever be so simple?
With a love once shared & a pain no man could bare.
Whats this phenomenal thing occurring?
Whatever it is we must focus on & see
But keeping mind the key word is we
which is now me
A relationship lasting no longer than what it started out to be.
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kamal
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2005-12-27 20:11:47]
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Re: Something phenomenal has occurred what could it be?
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by justme03 on
Friday, 6th January 2006 @ 10:24:30 AM AEST
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I really enjoyed this poem. I loved the lines "But keeping mind the key word is “we”
which is now “me”
A relationship lasting no longer than what it started out to be…." a great ending to a wikid awesome poem with an intriguing beginning and message.
Lots o Love, Kortnie
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